This was an actual post by a band. I like the enthusiasm in the text. I like that they posted about the show. Many bands mistakenly expect fans to check their tour calendar. How I think the post could have been better:
> Although they mention the venue, they did not tag the venue or put a link to where people can buy tickets to the show.
> They could have chosen a better photo. The ideal is to have a really cool live shot. Good back ups include a posed photo of the band, a shot of a guitar, drum kit, etc. To me this photo does not suggest “fun concert”. To me it says “nap on the beach”.
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